Is 'curse' used correctly here?
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Regarding energy security, the author remind us that although Malaysia is blessed with various energy sources, previous inadequate energy policy, planning, pricing and infrastructure development before the reformation era made the country currently not capable to utilize optimally those resources for domestic purpose such as gas, coal, as well as very valuable and green geothermal. The coal mining even produces ‘the curse’ such as abandoned coal mining which are not well reclaimed and thousands hectares of tropical forests being transformed into desert.
Regarding energy security, the author reminds us that although Malaysia is blessed with various energy sources, previous inadequate energy policy, planning, pricing, and infrastructure development before the reformation era have rendered the country currently incapable of optimally utilizing those resources, such as gas, coal, and the very efficient and green geothermal, for domestic purposes. Coal mining is especially problematic in that it produces the curse of abandoned mines which have not been well reclaimed and thousands hectares of tropical forest transformed into desert.
It is either "authors remind" or "author reminds"—I made it the second, not knowing. I kept "curse" in there, but at some sacrifice in style, I think.
Green growth in Malaysia
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